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Spirit Guide by =Yoruko:iconYoruko:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > Fantasy

©2009-2010 =Yoruko
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY YOU OLD HOBBIT FOOT. 8D I'm of course talking about ~WhiteFear! Senkin Frodon kolmas liikavarvas kihihi.

I tried to add all kinds of things you like. With extra glow! (((((C:

Magahi Whitefear belongs to :iconwhitefear::iconyoruko: *lick lick lick*
Art and textures by me. :)

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*Backwardstwin2 Nov 26, 2009, 8:33:51 PM
Your composition is amazing, and I love how storybookish the subjects are. Your use of medium is amazing. I would say that you might want to look at how you're shading your characters and where your source of light is coming from, whether it's from the eyes fo the Raven or the crystal orb. same with your backround and props. Keep in mind that you won't be able to see everything if you are using a dark space with a glowing light. Contrast would be another awesome idea. Overall amazing. I would by it as a print. I can't wait to see more from you!
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*Demonic-Haze Sep 25, 2009, 4:33:06 AM
This is such a lovely piece, I love the idea behind it, the concept looks fantastic.

The colouring on this looks beautiful, you handled the highlighting reall well. The green light source is really interesting. And you highlighted the body perfectly. Nice work on the shading overall too, I love the subtle texture that you have used through-out the colouring. The tree colouring is the most impressive, I love the texture that you have captured, it looks so 3D and convincing.

The anatomy however has some flaws, it's the arms that I have a problem with. The arm closest to the viewer looks a little too thin and bendy. The perspective on it looks like it's bending towards the viewer like rubber X_x it doesn't look stiff enough. And the arm furthest away from the viewer looks too long and out of joint. if he held his arms out straight one would look longer than the other. This can all be solved with perspective though C:.

However the expression is wonderful, you really packed a lot of nice emotion and feeling into the face, and it has been beautifully rendered. Also the placement of the characters is great too, they balance and fill the page perfectly ^_^.

I hope this helped a little C:
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~lX-0 Sep 24, 2009, 4:17:47 PM
:faint: holy cow ! that is awesome !

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~Draconien Sep 24, 2009, 4:33:20 PM
Melko nopsaa saat tehtyä hienon kuvan. :D
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~Sayuki-kun Sep 24, 2009, 5:33:50 PM
Beautiful! And I like your new avatar. ;p

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Black is cool, and so are dragons. Like it or not. [link]
My avatar was made by the awesome ~AK-ARII!!
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*Zukuda Sep 24, 2009, 8:29:45 PM
It's way awesome! :) I showed my friend and she just about fell over! xD

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*Zukuda Sep 24, 2009, 8:29:59 PM
;D why thank you!

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The Blue Raspberry Flavored Alien Dragon!
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~Icyshadowlord Sep 24, 2009, 9:20:45 PM
Makee =)

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I have the greatest hobby in the world:I create OCs (Original Characters) and write profiles X3.

Too bad I can't draw as well as I write...Curse these hands of mine!!

You may call me the OC-holic, The Disgaea fanatic or just Icy.
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~AcidicSubstance Sep 24, 2009, 10:32:34 PM
wow Yoru XD it looks awesome! I love the odd raven spirit
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*WhiteFear Sep 25, 2009, 6:39:05 AM
HEI NYT HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTCCCHHHH VOI SAATANAN GALAKSINEN BEM*YUREIKÄ JOHON ME JOSKUS IMEYDYTÄÄN KAIKKI. Et oo sit yhtään KATTONU TÄTÄ KUVAA. JA MIKÄ VITUN... FORDO RIPULIN KOLMAS LIIKAKYRPÄ. EIKUN OKEI MITÄHÄN KAIKKI MUSTA AATTELEE KUN AINA CAPSILLETNERN

Tässä on niinkun niin helvetisti _kaikkea_ mikä vaan... saa mut supistumaan jonnekin itsesäälireikään kun en vaan osaa ja toi HOHDE aaaahnammjaiskkaksonen :heart: fapfupfä psytysbd sitä on niin PALJON IHANAA )))C''':

Ei hitto nyt.. oikeesti. Palvon miten teit ton Maggen silmän ja arvet, ja toi korppikin on niin upea hooh noi sen kynnet. Ja sit kun osasit vielä tehdä ton Magahin korunkin, sadasd mä en enää edes muistais miltä se näyttää vaikka tuijottaisin suoraan mallista.. Et sit oo yhtään mennyt kehittymään koiraelukoiden piirtämisessä, et, senki paskelotin poikanen. 8-------D :heart: ja värittämisen kanssa sä nyt oot aina ollut mestari muutenkin ettäh.

Eiiih miks te Wirvarinen kanssa teette mulle tällasia upeita taideteoksia, saan niin kamalan huonon omantunnon kun ite en oo piirtänyt varmaan mitään koskaan. Ja sit mulle tulee tällasia naaman eteen että voisin vaan kuolla ja ottaa nää mukaani jonnekin kaksosparatiisiin eikun safhf.

Aaaaaah faverunkkausta :+favlove: :+favlove:

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=AutumnPendullum Sep 25, 2009, 11:27:58 AM
Omg woaow!! I saw it yesterday when you only sketched it and made the linearts but I didn't know it will turn out this great! So beautiful and also GLOWY! :love:

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